literature

was it a dream?

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Hands around my waist
I step back from your embrace
Trying desperately
To remember every detail of your face

The line of your jaw
Flowing gently
Giving warmth
To your cheek as it brushes mine

The trace of your lips
Smooth, gentle
Something I'll never forget
As they whisper 'I love you'

The set of your eyes
Soft blue as they look into mine
And for a second
I'm lost in time

In that fleeting moment
I can't recall
When I've felt safer
If I've ever felt more comfort

This time I hold close
I don't ever want to let go
It's you I want most
So please just hold me
Don't let go
haha i guess you could call it a daydream. wrote it last night. so.....nightdream? wakedream? idunno....regardless, you get the idea. comment and critique welcome
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KingTom02's avatar
This is well done. I reminds me of someone I love so dearly. If only she'd realize I love her so.

Hey that's start of a poem. Cool.