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How am I alive
When you have my heart

Have to admit
Without you I'd be torn apart

Scared as hell I'm shaking
Will you hold me tight

Feel so alone in this darkness
Will you be my light

I want you to stay
Give me a reason to hold on

Your trust I won't betray
Say the words and I'll go far away

Your words I don't take with a grain
Salt to the wound as some might say

You've taught me to feel
Something words can't relate

You've helped me find
A world I don't want to escape

So many things I want to tell you
Things I don't know how to say

I just didn't think it possible
To really feel this way

They say what they want
Try to hurt but I don't care

I know you might've set a trap
Maybe I'm just caught in a snare

Plain and simple
I'll lay it down

I feel so lost
Can I be found?

Water's not clear
Maybe I'll just drown
©2009 ~JadenRose
:iconjadenrose:

Author's Comments

idk. maybe i'll drown? i dont really know

comment and critique welcome

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:icondawnthehedgie:
This is really good... ^_^ I like the emotion put into it. Keep it up. Very nice.

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thank you very much ^^

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on your impulse,
swallow the bottle,
cut a little deeper,
put the gun to your chest."
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