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As long as you're happy by ~JadenRose:iconJadenRose:



Please understand
I do not want you to go away
Just tell the truth
And please dont lead me astray

I'm telling you with honesty
And I need that favor returned
Before ashes are left
And I'm eternally burned

I know you care
I know you're there
But please understand
I don't know if I'm up for false repair

Don't tell me something
Just to make me feel better
Be blunt, be straight
Get to the point

Is that girl you mentioned
Me or someone else
Am I your one
Forever and only

I'd like to be
If you wold show me
How to survive
Why I'm alive

Be honest
Tell me the truth about who you've fallen for
Tell me it's not me
Just as I know the truth to be

Please understand
That I don't want you to go away
Please understand
I only want to know why you stay
©2009 ~JadenRose
:iconjadenrose:

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:iconorbis88:
Fantastic. Very good word choice throughout and excellent flow.

--
"In the dark of the night
I can hear you callin my name
With the hardest of hearts,
I still feel full of pain"
Kings of Leon - Revelry

#Literary-Perceptions
*BleedingHeartsPoetry
*WritersGroup
:iconjadenrose:
thanks you very much

--
"Act
on your impulse,
swallow the bottle,
cut a little deeper,
put the gun to your chest."
---impulse, ellen hopkins

"Cry yourself a story, love. believe me, it works."
---Lucas, kevin brooks
:iconorbis88:
You're welcome, :) The last 2 lines are particularly good, an excellent way to close the piece. :)

--
"In the dark of the night
I can hear you callin my name
With the hardest of hearts,
I still feel full of pain"
Kings of Leon - Revelry

#Literary-Perceptions
*BleedingHeartsPoetry
*WritersGroup
:iconjadenrose:
thank you very much ^^

--
"Act
on your impulse,
swallow the bottle,
cut a little deeper,
put the gun to your chest."
---impulse, ellen hopkins

"Cry yourself a story, love. believe me, it works."
---Lucas, kevin brooks

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